Hey, thanks for the response. I knew the banana thing was Chutney's bit, though curious about the script itself, was everything there your idea? Anything he added in with the animation? All flowed together really well.
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I came to him with the story in my mind, though I changed it up a bit when writing the actual script to make more sense. Chutney was really nice about it and he followed the script very closely. My idea was for Johnny to stand on some kind of rock or something, he added the plant. Also, my original idea was for the skeleton in the corner of the Mark room to be Mark's real skeleton. Unfortunately, that created a plothole with Red Skeleton's body, so it ended up being his. So yeah, most of it was my idea and Chutney carried it out perfectly and with great skill. Oh, also Chutney probably had a lot to do with the timing, since I didn't specify length or anything.
Love it!
Thanks!
Awesome! I'm really glad for you, dude. I'll watch it and leave a review as soon as I get the chance.
Thanks!
Oh, hi Mark!
... sry, I can't stop!
What kind of drugs do you take???
Ah man, that plant was pure genius. XD I was wondering about that. It seemed like a Chutney detail, but twas all thanks to the rock I suppose! After that it moved to a somewhat different kind of comedy, bit darker, with a bit more The Room tone to it. The bits of writing on the wall, and details like that: all yours? Was cool how different this was from the regular thing, though still with the traditional style/characters.
Did you have any kind of storyboard sketches btw, or all written?
The bits of writing were my idea, yes. The other details were mine, too ( I think). And I only have a script, which wasn't really written following the rules of script-writing.
Many props for the writings on the wall then. :) And good to know, seems like you don't really need a storyboard then, oughta save a lot on time.
Congrats!
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Just saw the news via Patreon; about to give it a watch soon! Congrats on this pretty spectacular first dive into the creative realm of comedy!
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Thanks a lot! It was definitely a very cool first experience.