Wow, that was pretty cool! Interesting concept, mixing of sorta romanticized mythos and reality in the sound design. A little corny with the story and laughing/talking sound effects, but I think it works for this. Really like the bass part, and the way you incorporated the monitor beeping into its rhythm. I feel like some things could have been a bit more fluid, like you could have connected it better, so that not every specific sound whole had to phase out so much before the next one came in, it made things a lot more predictable. You had it in the latter half, but the first was pretty slow in that regard. The ambient whooshing could have been more pervasive throughout it. Also, the train sounds more like a plane, but whatever.
A cool concept that's not quite as well executed as it could have been, but that mostly nails the atmosphere.