Feels kind of incoherent, and I don't understand what happened in the end. The music, while good, didn't really fit that well. There was basically no real animation, but the art style could work. The story, like I said, is confusing and unclear. A lot of the shots drag on too long. Klariza seems to switch between happy and sad facial expressions in a weird way, like when she's first looking through the window. I guess work on drawing facial expressions. Also, try to practice your animation and try to cut down on shots that are long loops.