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The animation was not very fluid and it looks silly when the guy killing everyone is hopping like a bunny-rabbit. Also the ending is abrupt and it's short. Basically, work on your animation a bit. It's not the worst I've ever seen but it's not that good either.

The animation was good and wasn't choppy. I liked the gun part with the detailed motion. You should make something longer.

SpaceJaylee responds:

OK Thanks your comment ^^

The art isn't the most polished, but the animation is at least okay. I found it quite enjoyable. There was a nice mix of weirdness and humor. I wanna see more of this. The voice acting was also pretty good. I think the music can get a bit annoying.

pookastudios responds:

Thank you for your feedback.

This has lots of potential. The art was nice and there were some cool animation bits in there too. The biggest problem was the narration. It was very hard to understand because of the accent. I understand you're not a native English speaker and I'm not trying to insult you. I'm just saying that if you're doing an animation in English either have subtitles for the narration or (I consider this to be the better idea) ask for help from a voice actor on Newgrounds. Just go into the forums and find the help wanted part. Then just post what you need and wait for someone to reply. I hope you make more of these.

AguRex responds:

Thanks for the input but I wanted the narration to have an accent. The character is a Nigerian after all.

My sound engineering was to blame my other voice over worked well in my pervious work.

Some Nigerians can't understand American accent either.

Thanks again.

Good voice acting and nice art. Sometimes it was a bit hard to understand what they were saying though cause one speaks with an accent and the other one is quiet. Loved the ending too.

Too short and no sound. The character seems a bit unoriginal but don't quote me on that. The animation looks choppy and the only things that move are the lips, ears and eyes. Try making the next one more expressive and fluid and make a longer animation . On the plus side, the art itself looked pretty OK.

VanessaAnimeGirlRees responds:

Yeah this was my very first animation I ever made, the video play was sped up according to the app I used, and I decided to animate only the eyes, ears, and mouth so I’m ok with the criticism :) and like I said this was my first animation I ever made :)

Awful art and it's a series of low-quality photos. It had an OK setup but the punchline was less than satisfying. The "wait what" line is not an adequate way to end a joke. It ends up feeling quite bland. Also you could have had the zeros fall off the sign instead of just peeling it off, would have been more appropriate.

NickPy responds:

You're right. I should've worked really hard on it.

Looks like the animation is gonna be pretty cool and fluid. I look forward to seeing the final product(s). Although it is still a sort of trailer so...

For a test, it's pretty cool. The art is nice and the music is pretty cool too. It's a short and a test though, so I can't give you too good of a score.

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