It's only a couple seconds long and the art isn't very good. Make a longer version where something actually happens. It looks like it could actually be interesting.
It's only a couple seconds long and the art isn't very good. Make a longer version where something actually happens. It looks like it could actually be interesting.
I was pretty sure from the name and thumbnail, and that's why I clicked it, that this wasn't going to be deserving of an adult rating. I was completely right. The joke is delightfully weird and random but the art is not good, logical, considering the joke. It's also really short.
Seriously though fix that content rating, this should be teen at most.
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A nice but short animation. Maybe you could make a longer version as a full-on intro (although I suppose that wouldn't make much sense, considering how it was made for a non-existent youtube channel). Considering how short it is, I can't give it a higherrating.
Thanks for the honest critic!
I was learning to animate more than focusing on making the video longer.
Glad you liked it
Well that escalated quickly. The art was good, and there were some nice animation bits in there. It was funny and the voice acting was also good. Really liked this one.
It has some nice animation (although not always). The problem, is, however, you never really do anything too interesting with the credits themselves. Sure, you change the way they're presented, but you should be making them actually interact with the background in a cool way. Like, how cool would it be if the credits were actually made of the water dripping from the hoses(?). There should also be some music. Please take these recommendations into consideration.
Some nice animation, although I gotta say that I would have preferred less still shots and the theme from FMAB (I'm pretty sure) doesn't fit very well. I also wish this was longer. Next time, reduce the number of still shots(some of them don't even look very anime-esque), please and have more of that sweet character animation.
thanks, this video is really a big joke, the song does not fit the theme (at all), the art style its really not anime is more like my style.
As i´ve said before, this is really an upgraded version of the room opening just with Rocky characters.
Pretty funny, despite the style. The voice acting was actually decent. The animation wasn't very good, but it wasn't at a level where it would bother me. Nice work, dude. Just work on your art skills.
Thanks for your review and for your criticisms. I'll be sure to develop my character style and the animation itself was an experiment with a new technique I just learnt. Thanks for reviewing and telling me how to improve.
I gotta say, I wasn't sure if Tankmen was gonna live up to the words of praise. It sure did. The animation was great, and the jokes were cool too.
It was nice and watching the whole thing is much better than watching the individual shorts (especially the wrong way one). The animation is still awful, but it actually had some interesting and bizarre humor this time around. I don't mind the animation as much when there's actually stuff going on.
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