A fun little nice-looking thing. The background colors are nice and I like the soft aesthetic. I love the corgi. it's so cute and funny! The guy holding it is also a pretty fun character, it would seem, with the over-the-top face and outfit, as well as the corgi eureka shenanigans. I hope you get to do art more often, man.
Thank you for the kind words!! I am glad you like it.
I will definitely do more soon, just work is killing me haha
Thats what I get for wanting to draw cartoons for money.
Cool as usual, I like the somewhat darker colors, they're more menacing for sure. Symbols are still consistent, and you can't not like blade-hands. This in particular is done well, because the blade and helmet are very detailed and decorated so they draw your attention, and I feel like the ornaments in general look really nice with the blue.
The rough style would be great for this and I like the coal-like thing you went for, but I honestly can't tell any features of the character. I can see the feet and I think an arm, but the upper body seems mostly unclear to me, even after looking up some pictures of the character. Maybe I'm just dumb, or don't know the character well enough, but it's really confusing for me.
I understand and I’m glad you are sharing your thoughts on this piece of artwork I’ve done. I will focus more on specific features in the future to make sure they are visible and easier to make out. Thank you for rating and speaking your mind.
It's pretty simple, but it's got that Hyptosis style and charm. I guess the way to describe it would be comfortable and unique, with a certain fantasy/vintage feeling. Sorry if that was a stupid description for your style, I love it. The shading on the side of the face around the neck is a bit uncomfortable, since the lines are going in different directions.
Ooh, a gorefest. Your style definitely looks like a comic, which helps make it authentic. There's a lot of detail and lots of things going on. Still, I don't think Wolverine or Bane is fast enough to switch targets while the ones before them still have their limbs in the air, but it is really cool, so I can go with it. The gore is absolutely brutal and works with the style. There do seem to be some spatial problems. Like the guy in the air, whose gun is firing on the other guy, seems to be pretty far away, and the gun isn't really turned towards Bane, yet the bullets land relatively close to him. There's also that one guy behind Wolverine whose leg is still flying off, even though he's really far away. I said I could go with that, but this time it's a bit too much. Sometimes it's a bit hard to see how some things would be flying the way they are without extensive thinking on some logical way things could have happened, and, even then, the flying gun between Wolverine and Bane doesn't feel right. I'm assuming it's coming from the guy who got his fingers cut off, but I don't see how that would have happened. Also, why was the one place without blood splatter the face of the guy who got smashed into the ground by Bane? That was such a great opportunity! Wolverine's pose doesn't look like he just finished an attack, although I do appreciate that he's actually looking at the guy. Sorry if I nitpicked too much, it is still a really fun piece, which is probably what you were going for.
Oh, there's a nice feedback! Thanks for taking the time to write this down and let me know your thoughts. No worries about nitpicking. Constructive criticism can only help me get better! I appreciate it!
Okay, I'll try to respond to your comments below.
The main one I guess, "I don't think Wolverine or Bane is fast enough to switch targets while the ones before them still have their limbs in the air, but it is really cool, so I can go with it."
Actually this is true! As brutal as they are they are relatively slow to achieve anything close to that! I certainly followed the fun in this and wanted to create a sequence of action and destruction. Maybe, though, I could just go for something that felt more natural but well, enthusiasm got the better of me I guess.
" Like the guy in the air, whose gun is firing on the other guy" Yup, the area where the bullets end up was something I completely missed, didn't realize it until you said it.
"one guy behind Wolverine whose leg is still flying off" Just like in the first point, I agree. Also now that i think of it, having the other dead guy just in front of him, can make him look kinda off. I guess he could have died a few moments back, but still the storytelling would take a hit here.
"the flying gun between Wolverine and Bane" this was supposed to be the guy's smashed on the ground (supposedly right after having his head grabbed). Ooh, yes! It was a great opportunity to smash his skull or at least do some intensive damage there! Damn
"Wolverine's pose doesn't look like he just finished an attack" The problem here probably derives from the blood splatter on the foreground guy's back. This was just intuitive and has no other use other than having something in the foreground screaming "this is a gore scene". Wolverine is actually preparing an attack on this guy (with his left hand). Hopefully this would be easily communicated if not for the blood in the foreground. Still, i want to have more than just a guy in the foreground and certainly like the idea of Wolverine about to finish the target. Not sure how i would go about it if i was to do it again.
Hm, well anyway, I will hopefully remember stuff like this for the next piece!
Thanks so much for taking the time to leave feedback. Its awesome to see interaction especially when it is constructive! I certainly got something out of this!! :D
Damn dude! That's pretty cool. I like the style and the face is classic Batman. The costume has a nice level of detail. I'm not sure what that line thing around him is though. Could you clarify, please?
I love your style, it's absolutely great. This looks nice, it's pretty detailed, the colors are vibrant and contrasted but in a sort of mesmerizing, calming way. I like the way the background seems to be leaning into one spot, though it seems to be partial, since the train doesn't really look like that for the most part, and the left corner is going in the opposite direction. Maybe that was the point, but I don't know.
Yeah the Love Bus (it runs on dreams, jazz and love) originally leaned right the same way, but then I lost faith in the concept and made it more rigid and mechanical. It happens.
But absolutely, thanks bruv! Here to cram as many hallucinogenic kaleidoscopes as possible into a single image, regardless of the actual amount needed.
I like the style and the idea, though I'm not sure what the idea is exactly. Your description is about beer, but that clearly isn't it. It's called smoke break, but the thing that comes out of his mouth doesn't look like a cigarette. I like the face at the end, it fits the style and it's pretty cool, and I really like how he was just hiding all the smoke in his mouth. Overall, you've got a nice style going there, but you made it kinda confusing at the end there, because I just really don't get what that is.
Hi there, sorry for the late response. The descriptions have nothing to do with the comics but you did make me realize that I should be careful with them. For the second one that was all the way my fault, my comic is about 2 functioning drug addicts so I tried to make it a pipe, thank you for pointing that out. Thanks for the critique man I really appreciate it.
I'm a sucker for this kind of Victorian/Steampunk design. It's very cool and very detailed, and certainly a very cool idea. Good job! It's also pretty consistent with the plant/flower theme.
I really like this. The artstyle is great, and the goat looks absolutely insane! I love the face and the eyes, they all contribute to the insanity. The posing is great too, with the way he's sticking his head out like that. The outfit is fitting as well, and adds to our idea of the character. The colors and background are great and trippy as well. Pretty cool character piece overall. One question though-what's that white part inside his mouth?
Thank you for all your kind words! They mean a lot. As for your question you could mean a number of things so I'll just address all the possibilities. Above his lip are the bottom row of teeth, The little points below his upper lip are little front teeth, and then the white thing behind his head with the brown spots is his other ear. Hope I answered your question.