The graphics look appealing. However, there are things you could improve. For instance, the "ending" you get when you give the player all the right things is just a weird screen that's supposed to represent...something. At least explain what this screen means. Also, when you're in the ghost place, the character's slow movement is very annoying and the way the ghosts move the bookshelves around feels wrong. The other problem with this section is that you don't need to have a thought-out strategy for collecting the music scores. You just walk up and grab them. Also, the shelves should stop moving once the ghost leaves a room. At least there's gameplay variety, such as in the mine, but it's not very original gameplay (and the jumping in the mine feels a bit weird). When I was asked if I wanted to go back to my shop I said I wanted to keep exploring and the game just froze. i feel like the game would have been better if you put emphasis on the concept of being an NPC and stuck with it. Also, please fix the bug/glitch where the game crashed. Overall, a pretty good game for your first try.