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[Sublo & Tangy Mustard #3 - Inspirational Art]

This one was short and sweet! I loved Sublo's choice of art. It was just so ridiculously wrong! Tangy Mustard's could have been made a bit more disturbing, though this way it's a nice escalation. The line of "It smells like formaldehyde!" was great too. Tangy Mustard trying to recycle that was so like him, too. The ending with Katy's art was really unexpected. I can totally see what she was trying to make, too! Love the little detail of it being priced at $200. The voice acting for the concerned mother was so over-the-top and cliche, I loved it.
Another great episode! Man, you really can do characters.

[Sublo & Tangy Mustard #2 - Mascot Melee]

Hahaha, I love this one! The fight was great and I just can't get enough Tangy Mustard. His knuckle sandwich and cup full of sugar were just great. Loved Sublo yelling "That's not on the menu!", too. Wubhammer was just amazing as always. I loved Katy's mature cup tower and her face at the end and when Wubhammer says "And that's a metaphor!" I loved that part in general. Funny how the crowd got so into it as well. The third guy's line was a bit quiet though, could you tell me what he said? The absurdly cheesy ending with them dancing and being best friends out of nowhere echoed the last episode, and was great in this one as well.
Great job on this one, it was really funny!

Aaron-Long responds:

Thanks! The third guy says "you better bring it, Sublo!"

[Dragonpalz]

The animation was OK, and there were some nice jokes. I liked the pointless flashback and the way Goku tricked Vegeta. The humor was inconsistent though. Sometimes Vegeta's goofy, sometimes serious. This works when you up the random derpy stuff, but this way it kinda felt like it didn't know what it wanted to be. The voice quality wasn't perfect, but that kind of added to the charm. Voice acting was pretty good, and I liked how Vegeta had to say "again" at the end of his sentence. The silliness of Goku's attacks was also great. Not that big a fan of them running around the rock and stuff. It was pretty nice when Goku comforted Vegeta, and the blast at the end was pretty nice.
Overall, you had some nice jokes and a pretty good concept, but it feels like it didn't have enough time to fully figure out what it wants to do. Not really over-the-top or serious enough.

[Mr. Horzemen]

Oh man, this was great! I really love the surreal style and both the voices were spot on. The music was great, too. The line at the end was weird, but it kinda fit all the other weirdness. I really loved what you did with the background details, and the contorted shots and all the exaggerated movements. There was just so much energy in this, it's clear you put a lot of effort into it. Characters were great too, and Mr. Horzemen was just the right mix of over-the-top and creepy. Great job! Keep it up!

[Dog puppy]

A fun idea, even if it's in a state of roughness. I wish there were more sound effects and the scalpel one wasn't so weird. The tablet one also wasn't synced very well or fitting-sounding. The dog's face while peeing was weird, and the filter over the background was annoying and kinda took away from the immersion. Also, at the ending, the dog should look the same as it did at the start, like it's trying to pretend nothing happened.
Overall a cool idea but needs a lot more polish.

sheshu responds:

Thank you for your valuable comments. I have noted them all and will soon do the necessary corrections.

[Nice Guys Finish Last]

You had a decent concept, but the execution wasn't that funny. I was hoping for something about the likes of r/niceguys. The death scene sounds were pretty funny, and I did kinda like the cop finding him. The acting whimsical line was pretty funny too, but the volume was a little low throughout the whole thing. I had to adjust my own. It wasn't that big a deal, just a little thing. Now, actually, this wasn't as bad as I originally said it was. What first weirded me out about this is the lack of a real setup and punchline. The humor was kinda understated, which I was not expecting from a short animation like this. Also, the knife guy's voice could be better.
In the end, it was an enjoyable experience, even though there wasn't that much payoff. It was just "show up, get stabbed".

[Halloween]

I like the style, and it's a funny twist on the movies. I really loved him calling Loomis out and talking. The repeated dramatic phrase of "Michael talks" was great too. You just broke all the tension. Loomis' face was so dramatic and I lied the lighting on it. Good job, this was really funny. I'm taking half a star off because some of the close-ups look a bit ugly.

[Spongebob Squarepants: The Lost Episode - SUPERMEGA Animated]

The style was really nice and the voice acting was pretty cool too. I liked the story and how random the comedy was, as well as all the little background details, like Squidward's house turning into a face and Patrick's rock having a face on it. The narration was cool, I really like how it's just a reading of a script but it's made up on the go. A bit too many uhms though. Sometimes the humor got a little too random so it was kinda predictable and desensitizing and I wasn't a fan of the fiance thing. It just wasn't that funny. Squidward saying everything so specifically also didn't really get me in that scene. The ending was pretty nice, and I now love the term "spatula machine".
Overall, I really like the concept and there was some really funny stuff, but the humor got a bit too random sometimes.