The art and animation add to the surreal feel of this animation. The animation can be a bit too slow at times though. You're right, the sound design is pretty great and adds a lot to the overall experience. I liked this.
The art and animation add to the surreal feel of this animation. The animation can be a bit too slow at times though. You're right, the sound design is pretty great and adds a lot to the overall experience. I liked this.
Thank you! And glad you liked the sound :)
The animation isn't that good, but that actually kind of works in the movie's favor. The voice acting was good, and it was bizarre enough to be funny. I feel like the drama part should have been like "Why car!? Whyyy?" Instead of just why a bunch of times. This was a good comedic animation. Keep it up!
This is great feedback, thanks!
Pretty good art and though there wasn't too much animation, it was still good. Really funny and the dialogue is great. Voice quality was good as well. Keep it up!
Cool idea and nice, trippy animation. Music worked well with it. However, there should be an epilepsy warning instead of this one. The flashing lights at the beginning really serve no purpose.
Ah apologies, they did have reason for being there in terms of how I viewed the story, but you have a good point there
There's a nice amount of detail and the music is nice. The character movement isn't that good (which makes sense because stopmotion is hard) so I guess just keep working on that.
It's well animated but it's not something that's supposed to be on the portal. Animation tests are not really encouraged. I think you should keep animating, and when you've made something longer and more complete you should submit it.
Can I upload it without it being featured on the portal?
The animation is good, and the art art works perfectly with the humor. The voice quality is also pretty good. It was funny. Keep it up!
Great jokes and great voice quality. The animation for the most part was absolutely superb, but it was a bit choppy in the Barbecubicles bit. The facial expressions were funny too. There was a really cool mix of artstyles. Keep it up!
Thank you! The choppy animation you're referring to was actually a stylistic choice. I was going for a stop-motion type look so I decided to do that scene at 12fps instead of 24. Totally fair if that didn't appeal to you though. Glad you liked it overall!
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