TheReviewTrickster's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[ROUNDABOUT 1]

Good animation with some nice fight moves. Only problem is it's a bit short but as you took this as practice that's understandable. Also it didn't seem like the animation was completely fluid, might wanna improve that slightly.

jerrylov29 responds:

Yeah, obviously this animation is a immature work, it's a footprint of my learning process.
(Objectively speaking, it's actually not a fully completed animation, of course.)
I will not change it anymore, but I will observe and try to improve in the next one.
Thanks for your review and praise, I'm glad for it :D

[10 Types of Fighting - Animation]

The art and animation aren't very good. I liked the idea though. I guess just keep improving your animation and art.

NoobieAnimator responds:

I WAS USING MOUSE ONLY

[Madness Vendetta]

I don't know what's happening 'cause I haven't seen the other ones but I can still give my opinion. The art was different than normal Madness, and wasn't as perfect as normal madness. I didn't mind too much though. The animation was OK. It didn't really feel that Madness-y because the guys' bodies mostly stayed static when they walked and such. The action never really got too intense. A lot of it felt somewhat slow. There were some moments I really liked, though. One of the guys got punched and it felt like it actually had some weight to it. I liked the dead guy getting his head blown off. Keep practicing and improving, you have potential.

G4RPL3I responds:

I will change madness characters. To get the story, whatch whole series. Improvement will come :)

[Assassination foiled]

I like the art and the idea but it's a bit short and there were some problems with the animation. At one point, the guy's hand goes through the table a bit. The 1337 guy falls over too slowly and Hank would have probably stabbed him or something instead of just punching him. I'd love to see some gore in this. Keep it up and keep practicing!

Hidden-Maverick responds:

I would've added some gore if I knew how to animate for shit.

[Spinny Boi]

The animation does look pretty nice, but it really should just be a gif in the art portal. Ask someone for help with that. I would like to see you make a longer animation, as I think it would be quite good-looking.

GallowJolt responds:

Thanks for the feedback mate, will definitely have to get to that. Cheers!

[Súper man Animado en flash]

Pretty well animated, but it's really short. I really want to see this expanded into a bigger animation. You have potential

Animationstick responds:

thank you

[Talking Trash]

Animation and art are simple but nice. The joke could have been fleshed out more, like, "Do you have any idea what it's like to be filled with garbage!?" Or something. Please make something longer, I would love to see it.

littlbox responds:

Thank you for your kind words! I definitely agree that more could've gone into this, but I was just concerned with finishing an animation. :P

You have given me the idea of making it longer, and while I can't promise anything, I'll see if I can't make something :)

[Stickman VS. Target]

The animation was good and wasn't choppy. I liked the gun part with the detailed motion. You should make something longer.

SpaceJaylee responds:

OK Thanks your comment ^^

[My Life and the Bean Bings - Episode 1]

The art isn't the most polished, but the animation is at least okay. I found it quite enjoyable. There was a nice mix of weirdness and humor. I wanna see more of this. The voice acting was also pretty good. I think the music can get a bit annoying.

pookastudios responds:

Thank you for your feedback.

[PAPERTHIN The Ecounter Chapter 1]

This has lots of potential. The art was nice and there were some cool animation bits in there too. The biggest problem was the narration. It was very hard to understand because of the accent. I understand you're not a native English speaker and I'm not trying to insult you. I'm just saying that if you're doing an animation in English either have subtitles for the narration or (I consider this to be the better idea) ask for help from a voice actor on Newgrounds. Just go into the forums and find the help wanted part. Then just post what you need and wait for someone to reply. I hope you make more of these.

AguRex responds:

Thanks for the input but I wanted the narration to have an accent. The character is a Nigerian after all.

My sound engineering was to blame my other voice over worked well in my pervious work.

Some Nigerians can't understand American accent either.

Thanks again.