TheReviewTrickster's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[My anime animation]

Too short and no sound. The character seems a bit unoriginal but don't quote me on that. The animation looks choppy and the only things that move are the lips, ears and eyes. Try making the next one more expressive and fluid and make a longer animation . On the plus side, the art itself looked pretty OK.

VanessaAnimeGirlRees responds:

Yeah this was my very first animation I ever made, the video play was sped up according to the app I used, and I decided to animate only the eyes, ears, and mouth so I’m ok with the criticism :) and like I said this was my first animation I ever made :)

[Some things are just too good to be true]

Awful art and it's a series of low-quality photos. It had an OK setup but the punchline was less than satisfying. The "wait what" line is not an adequate way to end a joke. It ends up feeling quite bland. Also you could have had the zeros fall off the sign instead of just peeling it off, would have been more appropriate.

NickPy responds:

You're right. I should've worked really hard on it.

[Fighter Z Ain't No Show]

The animation and art were pretty nice. Humor could have been a bit less random and extreme. The voice acting was also pretty good. Also only about half of the video is animation, the rest is sketches/storyboards/I don't know. Usually you only include a bit of that while the credits roll or something.

Rovertarthead responds:

Yeah I guess I’ll cut that out. Wish Swfs would work so you can click on buttons again. No more havin your own menu screen or options.

[For Whom the Bell Knows]

Interesting idea and good animation. I feel like it ends a bit abruptly. I know that this was supposed to be his guilt that he can't get over but he could have at least realized something. The plot isn't the most original and it was obvious what happened from the beginning. There were these random bits of humor that didn't really fit the tone. For example, the bell slapping him with its.. *ahem* bell thingy. The voice acting could also have been better. The movie comes off as artsy, but not overly so. Keep improving and you're gonna make something amazing, dude.

coltenseamans responds:

Thanks and I totally agree with what you’re saying. Like the voice acting was my friends and professor, which was really nice of them to help out but I should have gotten some money together to pay actors at the university next door. A lot of blunders and ill planning definitely happened but I’ve certainly learned from that stuff :) I’ve got something in the works now and I’m looking forward to when I get to share it!

Thanks again for the critique!

[Oh No OJ]

I was pretty sure from the name and thumbnail, and that's why I clicked it, that this wasn't going to be deserving of an adult rating. I was completely right. The joke is delightfully weird and random but the art is not good, logical, considering the joke. It's also really short.

Seriously though fix that content rating, this should be teen at most.

Frostymanproduction responds:

OH! I'm so so sorry it was Honestly was a Mistake!
I'm new to newgrounds so idk What the hack I'm doing, but DON'T WORRY I fixed it UwU

[Bl00d Reaper(Intro)]

A nice but short animation. Maybe you could make a longer version as a full-on intro (although I suppose that wouldn't make much sense, considering how it was made for a non-existent youtube channel). Considering how short it is, I can't give it a higherrating.

SnackPriced responds:

Thanks for the honest critic!
I was learning to animate more than focusing on making the video longer.

Glad you liked it

[ROCKY Anime Opening]

Some nice animation, although I gotta say that I would have preferred less still shots and the theme from FMAB (I'm pretty sure) doesn't fit very well. I also wish this was longer. Next time, reduce the number of still shots(some of them don't even look very anime-esque), please and have more of that sweet character animation.

drainzerhg responds:

thanks, this video is really a big joke, the song does not fit the theme (at all), the art style its really not anime is more like my style.
As i´ve said before, this is really an upgraded version of the room opening just with Rocky characters.

[Kick Me]

Pretty funny, despite the style. The voice acting was actually decent. The animation wasn't very good, but it wasn't at a level where it would bother me. Nice work, dude. Just work on your art skills.

AnimationDynamite responds:

Thanks for your review and for your criticisms. I'll be sure to develop my character style and the animation itself was an experiment with a new technique I just learnt. Thanks for reviewing and telling me how to improve.

[My fighting animation]

Very basic and crude. The animation wasn't very good or fluid, which makes sense as you are twelve. Also, way too many stock sound effects and unclear plot. And it would have been nice if you at least panned to the guy consecutive-punching the other guy in the air.

Kainno responds:

sorry, im just a begginer i guess animating isn't my thing... i'll just stop

[Cancer]

The animation was okay, although it did feel a bit slow and static, which kinda fits. Also, I think it would have made more sense if the cancer took the guy's lungs. An okay semi-abstract animation.

Arxeu responds:

Actually I was thinking about taking lungs but I remember one comic doing this, so I wanted to do something different. You could interpret the heart as the source of life so cancer is taking away life. Or something. Yes, I'm trying to make this deeper than it is right now.